The poem is like a guide to how the be a man. It
should probably start out with step one don’t write poetry. Step two if you
failed to acknowledge step one, you have twenty four hours to kill a bear with
you bare hands or your man card will be revoked. Do note that your man card is
not an actual card. It is a chromosome and if you are to lose your "man
card", badass beard dawning Viking lumberjacks will kick your door down in
the middle of the day and rip that Y chromosome right out of your face hole
because sneaking around at night is for pansies. All jokes aside, this is in
fact a poem about how to be a man. And surprisingly it rhymes too. Do you know how
rare it is to see a poem that actually rhymes in high school? Teachers are too
into all that deeper meaning crap they forget what makes poetry bearable the
rhyming. Right, back to the poem itself. The first stanza is all about do not
do this do this instead. It's like one of those commercials. Don’t settle for
whatever get Direct TV. The first stanza is also more self
reflection/improvement. The second and third stanza is about being persistent
and not giving up. The last stanza is about being a down to earth person. I
personally like the last one because it's saying be the best you can be but
also don't be a dick about it and that is like advice for life because you
could be the most powerful person in the world and own everything but what
would be the point of having everything if everyone hates you and there's no one
to share the world with? The poem could help people to be nicer to each other
and all that and is still applicable today if someone had the time to sit down
and connect all of what the author is saying with things that modern people
could relate to because not many people would sit down and do it themselves.
What? Think? I'm not paid to think. I could just get it from Google because let's
be honest no one uses Bing. I just don't feel like most men would actually
think "I need to be a man, better read this poem". When you think
manly you do not think poems. Unless what you consider manly is like a hipster
or something. Which is cool too if you're into that kind of stuff. If this were
directed towards men, it would be less complicated and more to the point. This
feels like it is written for someone else to read and then tell the person it
is meant for about it. Just cut the middle man and get straight to the point
because everyone knows that guys can't take a hint to save their lives. If this
poem were a how to guide or a list like most normal guides are, I would think
that it would get more views than it does in poem form. But that's just my two cents.
Tuesday, November 25, 2014
Ain't I a Woman
Alright, so from what I can tell this poem is about
racism and feminism. Wow. Okay. Way to be creative. Right so the first stanza
is stereotypes on how guys are expected to treat women. Because feminists are
totally okay with having the opposite sex telling them what to do. So the next
two stanzas are about how she can do everything a guy can do and then asks
ain't I a woman. Mixed messages much? Do you want to be treated like a man or a
woman because I am not going to help someone over a mud puddle and then ask them
to plow a field because if they can plow a field they sure as hell can cross
over a puddle by themselves and if they can't cross a little puddle themselves
what makes you think they can plow a field. The last stanza was very religious.
But technically it was Mary and an angel and not God. And even if it was God
then Christ would still have been from a "man" and woman since later
on in the Bible and all Jesus refers to God as Father. So unless you go calling
your mom father I suggest finding a better argument. It is true that the first
woman turned the world upside down, at least it is in the Bible. I just do not
see it as an accomplishment as much as the author does. The author thinks that
since one woman could turn the world upside down, many women could turn it
right side up but I don't know. If one woman screwed up the simple task of do
not eat that fruit I wonder what a bunch of women could screw up. For those of
you who don't know, God created Adam and afterwards created Eve and they were
in the so called Garden of Eden. God then told them they could eat any of the
fruit from any of the trees except that one tree. So what do you think they
did? Yep they ate the fruit and end up betting banned from the garden. And that
sums up the first three chapters of Genesis. So Eve kind of screwed like
everyone over with that fruit because that was the birth of Original Sin which
is bad if you couldn't figure it out. The author basically said that if one
woman could change the world that much a bunch of women could change it even
more. The argument would've been way more reassuring if, you know, she used an
example that involved a woman changing the world for the better and not oh I don’t
know screwing over like all of the people. Just saying. I bet you Adam never
took Eve to another garden after that incident. I feel like the author of this
poem really needs to figure out where she stands on the topic and should write
so readers can understand her because she spent two stanzas saying I can do
everything a guy can do and then asking why won't people treat me like a woman?
Well maybe it's because you act like a man? I don’t know. And as a reader, I can
tell you that if one person of a group could flip the world upside down I am
not trusting the same group to flip it right side up because what if they mess up? Again. The world wouldn't be flipped it would be spinning every which way and that does not sound healthy. I think I'm fine with figuring it
out myself. You've done enough to help thank you and goodnight.
Thursday, November 13, 2014
Social Imagination
I agree with the quote "We all have our
social imagination: the capacity to invent visions of what should be and what
might be in out deficient society, on the streets where we live, on our schools."
The beginning of the quote is true enough. "We all have our social
imagination", however, may be technically incorrect because it claims that
everyone has a sense of imagination and imagination might be something that not
everyone has. Aside from that, the quote is true. Everyone has the ability to
view something however they want. Having the ability to imagine what society
should and should not be like does not mean that the person is going to be able
to change that society that he or she lives in. If the quote is saying that
everyone has the ability to imagine the world that they think would be perfect,
then the quote is probably true because anyone can imagine something. Most
people would want a society that is peaceful where all the bad things like death
and destruction do not exist which I think would make a very boring society.
Sometimes there is that one person who instead of just imagining the society
they want to live in, they actually go out and try to make the real world more
like how they saw it in their mind and that is a wonderful thing to do because
that person is trying to make their reality just as awesome as how they imagine
it. I am kind of glad that not many people try to go out and change things to
the way that they think is right because if everyone did that then nothing
would be right and it would be chaos. There is probably at least one person who
is like "hey chaos that is my kind of society". So I guess yeah sure I
agree with the quote. The way it is worded though makes it really strange
because nowhere does it actually mention taking an appropriate course of action
towards achieving your desired choice of society. All it says is that everyone has
the ability to imagine what kind of society they want so perhaps what it is
actually trying to say is that a person can dream about a perfect society but
will never actually get it. That would actually suck quite a bit unless people
develop some sort of virtual reality Matrix or something to throw people's
thoughts and desires into a computer generated world and let them live out
their lives happy. Hey that was a plot from Supernatural where Dean fights that
djinn and it sends him into that alternate universe where his life is the way
he wanted and Dean has to wake up before the djinn drains all of his blood and
kills him. Right spoiler alert. Well to summarize up my answer to this question
that required way less than five hundred words to answer, I do in fact agree
with the quote "We all have our social imagination: the capacity to invent
visions of what should be and what might be in out deficient society, on the
streets where we live, on our schools."
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